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December 14, 2005
Content (38/40)
When I first say you request I thought "Hmm, that's an interestined username" But then I read about why you chose it and it call came together.
I really like this entry. I also really like this entry for some odd reason, because I can actually relate to it. I felt as if I was reading the words of my diary. I felt like I should be saying them too.
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA this entry made me laugh sooo much. That little diddy at the end was hiarlious. I don't know why, but it's just so funny to me when guys measure themselves. I know it's important to some people...but it's just hilarious to me. Great. :) Haha, still getting over that one. As if he knew...oh man. Okay, we shall procede.
I also agree with you when sometimes movies are better than the books. But that could be because I read the book AFTER I watched the movie. I'm sure that factors in there somehow. Oh, amd out of that entry...why do you hate laptops? I love them. Keeps me from being bored.
Alright, here we go. Your entries vary on the writing style. You sometimes day log and you sometimes just write about what you are feeling. It's a good balance of both. I'm liking it. I think I just might add you to my favorites list.
Layout (12/20)
The layout is alright. It certainly fits your username. But the font isn't my favorite since I have to squit to see it. Not the easiest in the world to read. It's also the classic set up so nothing pops out to me. The first impression was blah.
Navigation (14/15)
It works. I'm not sure how I'm liking the previous and next buttons at the top though. Your email button does not work. The way to make it work is < a href="mailto:your email address here">Email< /a> Without, of course, the spaces. I also like that quote you have. I happen to be a Little Mermaid fan myself (especially when I was younger) but of course...no one knows that but you and me now.
Link (5/5)
Yes, on the reviews page. Muy bueno.
Extras (15/10)
I aboslutely love love LOVE the creative writings you have written. They are sooo sweet. I hope they don't end bad, but from other stories I've read that other diarylanders have written about premarital sex have always ended up badly. I reall like it though. Awesome. :) Can't wait to see what happens next! I also really like this poem you seem to be full of creativity.
Contact (10/10)
Email, notes, and guestbook. But your email link doesn't technically work...however I will spare you that. I'm sure it will be fixed............hopefully.
Favorites/Comments
Favorites: My favorite entries definately have to be the stories about Seb and Jana. I love them and hope to come back for more!
Comments: Keep it up, maybe change the layout arrangement a bit. Shake it up a little.
Total: 94/100 Man! You were ALMOST on the Hall of Fame.
Reviewer: Chaucee