Re Review for bitterneuk
January 09, 2006
First review completed on: 12-04-05
Previous reviewer: Chaucee
Alright, most of my scoring stands like the last one except for some extras and comments, so I've decided to just write about your diary and how you've improved. If you want a score for this review, just let me know and I'll figure one out.My comments about your writting still stands in your previous review. This is the second time I reviewed, your diary and I'm not quite sure why you would want another one. You got a 40/40 on the content page and the layout section you soared in, so I guess it was just the orginizational part of the diary (and the lack of extras) is what brought your score down.
I still think that the layout need to be polished up some more. An extras page is what's needed (really bad). You have all these links to tons of extras, except it is overflowing the navigation box located on the left side of the screen on the image. Also the polls that you have at the end of the entry do not give a polished look. I think one entry dedicated to polls, surveys, and quizzes should be in order here. Which can be linked on the EXTRAS PAGE. See, this is all working out. :)
Now, you've gotten a little more friendlier around this time. You have notes and email. Haloscan is always good for those who aren't diaryland users.
The link is still there, good. And I see that you have taken all the review links and put them together on one page. Very good, much better.
Overall, your organization of your diary still needs some polishing up. An extras page that contains all the links to your quizzes, 101 things, who's who, and 43 things would be very nice and aid tremedously in cleaning up your diary. Also an entry for the polls and surveys down at the bottom of each entry need to go. You can put them all in an entry and link it on the extras page.
Re-Reviewer: Chaucee
Previous Review: Bitterwineuk