bitterwineuk
December 04, 2005
Let's all have a BIG laugh now! You're using one of the templates that I made at my site Teen Designs. I'm glad that you like it! I just wish you would of read the rules and left a link back to your site. It makes me happy when I see them "in action" (haha).
I like your entries, because no one writes like you do. I guess it's the way you word things or something...it seems you are genuinely happy. I also love reading about your family! It's so enjoyable. I was really shocked when I learned this: "I have not been bitten for a while either, only as teasing and playing. My bruises from that have all gone." Your child BITE YOU?!?!?! I think I'd be a little scared to meet them in society! But I still love reading of all the memories that you write in your diary! It's so enjoyable.
After I was finished reading your entires, I couldn't believe that it had gone by that fast! That's a good thing :)
I wonder where you got your username.
Layout (20/20)
We already know where you got this layout :) Haha, you are lucky my friend.
Navigation (14/15)
I don't like how the box is over flowing with links. I suggest that you make a separate page for all of those links and link them there. That way your template looks more put together.
Link (5/5)
On the main layout. But still, I would suggest making an extras page and putting all the review links there.
Extras (0/10)
You have no extras. Hmmm. Another diay does not count as an extra, and all those little things (don't know what they are called) at the bottom of your entry don't count as extras.
Contact (/10)
Notes. Not very friendly I guess. (?)
Favorites/Comments.
Favorites: I loved them all. Except for maybe one.
Comments: You had a PERFECT score in the content and layout section, I just wished that you would of scored high in the other areas too...then you would of gotten a higher score and gone on the Hall of Fame! It makes me sad to see a good diary not be recognized. Maybe I should start a page for people just like you. Good content, but not much extras or contacts (which can hinder...as you've noticed).
Total: 81/100
Reviewer: Chaucee