braided
November 17, 2005
Content (40/40)
I started at the very beginning with the Introduction. I like
how you described your username
Braided (my username) is because I wear braids a lot, and I like to think that it sort of describes my thought process. A lot of ideas and random thoughts that are woven together and make sense once you see them all laid out, but it is completely twised and strange once you pull them apart.. It's unique and I like the thinking that went into it. It's also very creative that you are naming each entry after a song name. After reading the first three entries I was under the impression that you might be an angry person. Hmm. I loved this entry. No one can take my coffee away from me. Stand strong girl, stand strong.
Overall, I really liked your writing. I can't say exactly why, but I really liked it.
Layout (11/20)
You changed layouts while I was doing the review, so I'm going to have to grade you on the one you currently have. I loved the one you had earlier with the girl lying down. The colors were nice, and I loved the setup. It emphasized more on the writing, and I like that a lot. The one you currently have I really don't like. Which is a shame because if only the first template was up for a little bit more, then you would of gotten a higher score. Oh well, such is life.
Navigation (13/15)
The navigation looks bad. I don't like how the box is longer than the entry. All of the links work, so that good. The layout of them is not nice.
Link (5/5)
Right on the front page.
Extras (0/10)
You have none. You have links to other sites that you like (like magazines) but not any extras about you.
Contact (9/10)
Email, and notes. It could be better (tagboard, guestbook, aim).
Favorites/Comments
Definately the High
School Hop. Words of Advice: Get some extras on about you (what you like to do, surveys, question and answers...stuff like that), change the layout, and possibly keep all your links on one page (which would most likely be the extras page).
Total: 78/100
Reviewer: Chaucee I really liked your writing, I just wish the presentation of it was better.