deathred467
June 02, 2005
Content (34/40)
(I read your whole diary. I know I didn't put any links in, but I've
run out of time to link to specific entries as I might have liked
to.)
I like this. When I first glanced at your diary, I wasn't sure what to
expect. I was afraid of getting a whiney drama queen, but instead, I
got a bright, spunky young woman. The writing is average, but you use
complete sentences, punctuation, and capitals. That's fantastic. And
you tell an actually coherent story in your entries. There's always a
point. The slight bit of voice I can catch is pretty awesome too.
Again, it's spunky, no matter the emotion. Your writing voice carries
a tinge of a "devil may care" attitude. And then, sprinkled atop, is
your refreshing zest for life. All in all, it's fun. I might consider
revisiting you in the future now and again.
Layout (12/20)
I'm torn on what score to give you for layout, so I'm going to
give you half credit, but not because it's necessarily a bad
design. I've seen better designs, and the colors on this one are a bit
strange and mismatched, but it's not bad. You do need to fix the
archives page font though. Take out the code telling the font to be
big and times new roman.
What I can't decide though, is whether it really fits the writing I
found in your diary. The design seems so emo and dramatic and a tad on
the cliché-ish side, whereas your writing is really none of those. At
the same time, it does exude a bit of an attitude that aligns
perfectly with what I found in your diary. So I don't know. I'd be
inclined to suggest that you find a new design, but since my opinion
is not a big deal, I'll let it go.
Actually, I'm going to give you two extra points for protecting your
stuff. You must have added all the JavaScripts and right click blocks.
Nice idea.
Navigation(15/15)
Neat, simple, and easy to find. Full credit.
Link(5/5)
Yes. Also easy to find and accessible.
Extras(9/10)
A good amount of extras that tell me everything I need to know. I
loved the write ups on the cast page. Excellent job of summarizing
people. I also like the name of your hobbies page, Leisure Pursuit.
Fun stuff. I didn't give you a full ten points because it's all fairly
run of the mill. Which is perfectly fine, but for full credit, I'd
like to see something starkly original, creative, or innovative.
And by the way, you are intensely adorable and I love your hair.
Contact(6/10)
Notes, email, notifylist.
Favorites:
The black nail polish life analogy. That was rather interesting.
Total: 81/100 Reviewer: Megan