faerie-jewel
April 11, 2005
Content (15/20)So I know something has happened but I don't know what. I write like that too. When there's just too much to explain or I don't want thousands of people being able to read what I want kept personal, I don't write all the details. But since I'm reviewing you and not me, I'll have to say....what the heck are you talking about? Your friend? Boyfriend? Also, the next entry you write a whole entry without even metioning a name. I don't mind that because I write like that, but for other people it might be a bit confusing.
So from reading your entries it seems like you are confused about some guys...who to like who not to like. The usual. But since I have NO IDEA who you are talking about, I can't follow. I get the guys mixed up, I'm not even sure if there are two guys. Ahh, this is confusing.....not easy to read.
Okay, the punctuation. Please, please, please capitalize! It's driving me insane. At least I know where the sentence stops because I would have no idea where it begins.
I like your writing, but I'm trying to keep in mind what other people would think when they read it. It would probably be hard to follow along (I was having trouble sometimes). So I would suggest that you use names, and if you don't want that then lock your diary or open a new one where you can release EVERYTHING without the normal people reading it. Really, please name these people.
Layout (28/40)
It's kind of plain, and I don't like pink and purple...it's too girly for me. The links are boirng and I don't really like that font. the boxes to the left are a little too small. Credit goest to Unique Designs.
Navigation (13/15)
As I said before, the link font is kind of big and it doesn't match the size of the font in your entry box, and I don't like that. Maybe I'm being too particular, or maybe you just caught me on a bad day.
Link (5/5)
Yes, there it is. No problems here.
Contact (2/10)
Email, Notes. Whoa, no one can stalk you. What happened to having a guestbook? Tagboard? AIM? These things are not hard to put on.
Extras (2/10)
You have a cast page, and a place where you have all these quizzes listed. I don't know if that really is an extra. But you have absolutely nothing else! C'mon, I need to read some more random stuff (like 100 things about me, hates/loves, life goals) stuff like that.
Favorites
I don't know, you had good content, but I can't pick out one entry that stood out to me, they're all alike.
Total: 63/100
Reviewer: Chaucee