herdarlinsin

September 17, 2005

herdarlinsin

Content (33/40)
Your writing is very thoughtful and I have to commend you on your honesty and your ability to really put yourself out there through your writing. That being said, something is off for me, and I can't quite put my finger on it. I know it's some kind of personal feeling about the tone or style or something, so I didn't necessarily take points off for that. There were also occasional mispunctuation, misspellings, and grammatical mistakes which I did take points off for.

Layout (16/20)
The layout is fine, it's just not really my taste, but I won't take points off for that. I wish there was more contrast between the text and the background, although I'm not sure how well the image would work then; so I guess it's kind of a catch-22.

Navigation (15/15)
Everything works, and it's all neatly arranged and everything, so I guess there really is not much more to say.

Link (5/5)
It's there

Contact (10/10)
I now pronounce you sufficiently stalkable.

Extras (10/10)
Plenty of stuff to keep the reader occupied.

Favorites I guess there weren't any that stuck out for me as a favorite..

Total: 89/100

Reviewer: Pat

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