ishouldcry
December 05, 2005
Content (32/40)
I started reading at the very beginning of your diary. You haven't had this one for long. But it started out very sad, with all the troubles you had as a teenager. At the end of this entry, you say Sometimes the thrill of the chase and the build up is what makes things exciting. I agree; that's the way it was with my first boyfriend. But afterwards, I learned that we didn't even have that much in common. He believed different things than I did, and was into other things that I wasn't, and in the end...it failed. So yeah, lesson learned.
Whenever you update, it's usually longgggg. Sometimes I feel like it's rambling, but it's good to get those emotions out. That's why I have a diary/journal too. I couldn't relate to much just because I'm not married, so I wouldn't know how it is. But I am glad for the reason you've stopped writing in this diary. :) I'm glad you don't have as many sad things to write about.
Layout (18/20)
After reading why you chose this design, I get it. Before I didn't really like it, but I think it fits your diary well. I think the line height is a little too close together which makes me have to concetrate a lot harder to see (but this can be easily fixed in the HTML). That was no fun, but other than that it's alright...although a little bit plain. I wouldn't of chosen it, but it fits well.
Navigation (12/15)
I don't like the recent five at the bottom of the entries. But I DO like the images for the links at the top. The font fits well, and it all looks nice. Man, I'm using that word a lot lately. Other adjectives are just slipping from my mind. Your profile, contact, and guestbook links do not work.
Link (5/5)
On the main layout. I think there should be another page link on the main layout with the review links and misc. links there.
Extras (0/10)
No extras, once again. Maybe next time you request a review from another place you should read the scoring. That is what they look for in your diary. It might help with the total in the end. Bring it up a little. In this case, it would work miracles.
Contact (6/10)
You have notes and guestbook.
Favorites/Comments
Favorites: I didn't have any...mostly because I couldn't relate.
Comments: Fix the template links, swap some extras on there about you (things to do before I die, 100 things, quizzes, surveys...stuff to get to know you more, favorite things...etc.) then you'll have it made.
Total: 73/100
Reviewer: Chaucee