jaykay617
April 30, 2005
Content (20/40)
There's not really that much to comment about. You pretty much just write
about what you did all day, and I don't really care about what you did all
day. As an aside, I hate the word "supper" and I don't
know why. It's dinner anyway. "Supper" is what you have in the evening
after you've had a lard midday meal, i.e. Sunday dinner or Easter
dinner.
Your spelling and grammar are fine. Actually, you probably
have the best English skills of anyone I've reviewed so far, you are just
not interesting.
Layout (15/20)
I actually don't hate the design. It's a tad mushy for my personal tastes,
but I won't hold that against you. Something about it is off, but I can't
put my finger on exactly what that is. Maybe because it's aligned towards
the left side of the screen, and I am a fan of the centered layout. I don't
know. But overall, it's not bad.
Navigation (15/15)
Everything works.
Link (5/5)
It's there.
Contact (8/10)
Sufficiently stalkable.
Extras (9/10)
Quite a few to choose from, but do you really need to list that many people
on your cast
page? If you don't write about them regularly, don't include them. Just
because they aren't on your cast page doesn't mean you don't love them.
Favorites Not really.
Total: 57/100
Reviewer: Pat