lonelyinrain
January 17, 2006
Content (21/40)
First off, I really like the username. Now on to the review.
You swear a lot in your entries. I'm not partial to that. Better adjectives can be used to describe how you're feeling.
Quotes:
1)"Why do people never ask how I’m doing? If I ask them how they are, they tell me but then don’t ask how I am. Either they’re just that rude, or just really don’t give a damn about me. What does someone like me have to do to get some attention? Die?"
2)"I love the feeling I get everytime I hear a good song. A song I loved long ago, and haven't heard since I got over the obsession. See, that's me for you. I obsess over a song for a few weeks or months, and then I move onto another one. Then some months later I hear it, and I get that same feeling. It's pretty awesome. Because music is awesome. To the max."
You seem to be very depressed and mope around. You don't have a job and you write argumentative essays (okay, only one that I know of so far) but it seems like your life just isn't working out for you. If I would continue to read your diary on a daily basis, it would probably suck me into your world of depression. And that's not where I want to be...so I probably won't be back.
Layout (13/20)
Haha, the image made me laugh when I looked at it. I is a girl sitting in a tree house with the sign "No Boys!" written on it. However, she has a raincoat on and rain boots, so it appears to be a rainy day...which fits your username. I've never been too fond of this layout setup (where things are placed) but the colors, links, and image is nice. It just don't like how it's rearranged. You made the layout so 3 extra points for that.
Navigation (15/15) It all works; good job.
Link (5/5)
On the extras page.
Extras (11/10)
When you descrive yourself you're so harsh. You also have a picture of yourself and I don't think you're ugly. Are you writing that for want of compliments? You have the perfect ammount of extras.
Contact (10/10)
Email, notes, yahoo, and AIM.
Favorites/Comments
The only favorite things I had were the quotes that I listed in the content section.
Total: 75/100
Reviewer: Chaucee