lostcookie
April 04, 2005
Content (13/20)
The first entry
was very intriguing, and it definitely made me want to read on. However, as
I did read on I was a bit disappointed. I felt like many entries were about
what you did but you don't give the reader any insight about how you feel,
or how those things you did made you feel. I'm not looking for an in-depth
psychological profile, but come on, give me something about YOU. I felt
like this was
the first entry that really tells anything about who you are and that made
it so much more interesting than the entries where you just describe how
school was. As far as this entry is
concerned, you never grow out of those "petty messes", or as I used to refer
to them "high school drama" because as it turns out, people in the "real
world" are often petty. Resign yourself to the fact that you are above all
of that, and you will be much happier when a "petty mess" does happen. In
fact, you might even be able to laugh about it. I know that all this stuff
that is happening in your life that you write about causes emotions and
thoughts that you may not be willing to share with others, even anonymous
web surfers, but if you spend even just a little more time thinking about
those emotions and using them when you write, you'll find your writing
becomes more personal and your readers will be able to really connect with
you more. I do however think you are quite funny and you definitely have a
wonderful sense of humor that comes across in many of your entries. But,
not a fan of Hamlet? Boo!
Layout (30/40)
The layout was created by Diva
Designs who I am a big fan of, having used layouts from her before.
Your particular layout has a very vintage-y feel, which is fantastic. It's
like a vintage postcard. I'm not that keen on the colors because I feel
like they are a little washed out and from reading your diary, I know you
have a much more vibrant personality than the color palate would suggest.
Navigation (14/15)
Almost everything works and is easy to locate. Check the link to your to-do
list on your extras page.
Link (5/5)
No complaints here. This like is here.
Contact (8/10)
If I wanted to stalk you, I'd have quite a few options available.
Extras (6/10)
You've got a cast page, diaryrings, and a To-Do List that I find
very amusing.
Favorites I guess my favorite entry would be this one because it definitely made me laugh, and let's face it, we can all use some immaturity in our lives at least once in a while.
Total: 78/100
Reviewer: Pat