m0nique
October 18, 2005
Content (30/40
You do have some spelling mistakes here and there, but then again, don't we all? You also swear, which I never like in a diary. I think better words can be used. Also, sometimes I just didn't understand what you were saying. For example this:
We so could keep strait faces. Just sat there trying not to totally loss the plot. Honnestly so high school styles.I think that you do what most people do. Think fast and don't type as much. Some think that they've typed what they've been thinking so they need not go and review what they've just written. But honestly, most people aren't perfect and skip words here and there. I would suggest re-reading things before you post. I write my entry, then go read it in my diary (after it's posted, because I can read the font better) and then I go back and correct my mistakes. That ways it's easier to understand.
Mostly your diary is about university life and the drama that unfolds. But in your case, there isn't much.
Layout (15/20)
It's alright. I'm guessing the picture is of you on the right. I like the font and the color of the font. But I'm not really liking the font of the links on the left, it's hard to read. The one link after reviews...yeah, noooo idea what that says. Designed by you, 3 points for that.
Navigation (13/15)
You didn't get any points off in the last section for the links being un-readable, but you will get points off for that in this section. I'm thinking only about 1 or 2. Links are crucial to navigate a site, and when you can't read 'em, it's a lot harder. More hitting the back-space that I'd like to.
Link (5/5)
Yes, we are one of those review sites that are actually still alive. Imagine that!
Extras (10/10) Cast, pictures, reviews, 100 things, and quotes (but you barely have any). You should have a page that is linked on the main layout containing all of those separate links of the extras.
Contact (6/10)
Notes, guestbook. Not very friendly I guess.
Favorites
None. None at all.
Total: 79/100
Reviewer: Chaucee