mentalscars
October 17, 2005
Content (40/40)
Whoa! Good luck trying to find someone who would be willing to pay for this! But you're right; this is more realistic than most people's dreams becuase you actually have a floor plan.
Haha, so you think we aren't very nice people? I love it when I come across a diary who speaks of reviewers. It's so much fun. :)
You definately have an imagination, or maybe it's just a good use of words. But the way you describe your hair in this entry makes me laugh and think no one has ever described their hair like that to me. If someone said that to me in person, they would be my idol. As the entry progesses, it gets better. I love how you describe things!
The quiz you took in this entry, I think, describes you well. I took that same quiz and got rebellious. Hmmm
I really like the poem-type-thing in this entry. But then at the end you got all sad. I hope it was just a bad day.
Alright, now that I've highlighted some things, it's time for the final review. I liked your diary. There, that wasn't so bad now...wasn't it? We (reviewers) aren't all horrible! No, but seriously I liked your diary. When I first started reading it, it seemed like one of those diaries that are going to be all dreams and fantasies and writing about things that happen in another world. I never know what those diariets are talking about, and it's frustrating. But I liked your diary because of the unique way you would describe things. It made things wayyyy more interesting to read than the normal average day log.
Layout (9/20)
Eh, it's alright, Not something that I would have picked. But it's alright. Not terrible. BUT it took some time getting used to it. First glance - I didn't like it at all. But now it's growwing on me.
Navigation (15/15)
It's all lined up nicely on the left hand side. And I like how it looks. You've got a lot of links though.
Link (5/5)
Yup it's there, along with all the others. I thought you were a little timid at requesting for reviews. Well, I guess the ammount of requests on that page has diminished that thought.
Extras (9/10)
Bio, diaryrings, pictures, reviews, poems, and music. Well I couldn't really read the biography because of the font.
Contact (9/10)
Email, notes, and guestbook. Fairly stalkable.
Favorites
None really stood out to me. I think I liked all of them just about the same. Well maybe the one with the poem (one that I highlighted in the content section).
Total: 87/100 The thing that really hurt you was the layout part.
Reviewer: Chaucee