onewetleg
November 09, 2005
Content (30/40)
The first entry that I read was this one. It was a good start to a review, because it made me laugh. Let's see how the rest goes. Alright, now I'm wondering why you put your phone number on the internet. Of course that could always be your arch enemies phone number, or it could be made up. Not a very smart choice. This entry also seemed like a waste of time and good grammar (or lack of it) until I reached the end. It made me laugh...you talking to your trash can. Otherwise, it was a pointless entry, and it seemed like you were scrambling to write about something. All of the entries that I've read have been really and pointless, but you always come up with something funny to spark it up. Sometimes you use capitals and punctuation, but then other times you don't. I guess it all depends on your mood. Also, you should separate your paragraphs more. Otherwise it seems sloppy and doesn't look like good structure. Instead of just "breaking it" (going straight to the next line with no space inbetween) make sure that you hit the enter bar two times to add some space inbetween paragraphs. I find myself trying to sort out what you're saying. It seems like you jump around a lot from topic to topic, sorting it out into clear, visible, distinct, paragraphs would be easier for the reader to be following along with your fast topic changes.
Hmm, this is very interesting. I would be freaked out living with a person like that. You also forgot to close the link on this page. In that entry that I just linked, you have some pictures in it. I'm guessing you are one of those people who take pictures of everything they see. You definately have some interesting pictures in that entry.
All in all, most of your entries were pointless except for one that I can think of. But they all held me attention, at least a little bit. You had something funny to say or a little spin on something. Good job, but I don't know how much longer you can keep that up.
Layout (0/20)
I hate it. Absolutely hate it. It makes me want to puke. The pictures that rotate, some of them are cool and some of them aren't. Like the old shoe, and the tatoo on the nake person's back. Yeah, didn't want to see down that far. The links are all screwed up with the colors being blue after you click on it. The background color is nasty, and the little "intro" at the top of your page next to the image is not needed. Put it in an entry and link it on your main page. The navigation is disorderly, and I don't like how the entry is set up. I just hate it. And this is the first time I've ever said that.
Navigation (2/15)
It's all on the right site, but I don't like how the links are blue after you click on them, and you have LOTS of links that go WAY father than your entries ever go. You need to put them all in one entry and link it. That way it's not as sloppy. ALSO, about the archives, I hate how it goes into another browser. It's not that bad, but it's annoying. Oh yeah, down at the bottom of you entry page you have a link that looks like this <
Link (5/5)
Well well well. What have we found here. The link on the main page. I couldn't see it before because of the color of the font.
Extras (10/10)
Well, you certainly have a lot of extras. As you can see by the bountiful ammount of links you have on the left hand side.
Contact (6/10)
Guestbook, email, comments.
Favorites/Comments
They were all okay. I've never been this mean in a review, and I have to admit...it's not fun. The layout is what really hurt you. And the link.
Total: 53/100 Ouch
Reviewer: Chaucee