onlydespair

May 14, 2005

onlydespairx

Content (35/40)
In one of the first entries you wrote you made mention of IM conversations. One of my diaryland pet peeves is when people post endless pages of their inane conversations with people I don't care about. However, you took the high road and made reading your IM conversations optional, so you definitely get points for that. I feel like you are a bit melodramatic at times, but your entries are chock full of emotion. You have a nice style of writing, although sometimes I wish you would write more. You totally won me over when you listed To Kill A Mockingbird as one of your favorite books and you won me even more when I found a couple quotes from Garden State, which is possibly the greatest movie ever. I didn't really see any grammatical or spelling errors, which made me extremely happy. The only real error I saw was that the poem Wynken, Blynken and Nod (one of my favorites from childhood) was not written by Shel Silverstein. It was actually written by Eugene Field.

Layout (10/20)
Everybody and their brother has this layout. I like the idea of red, white and black together in theory, but the actual implementation of the concept is lacking.

Navigation (15/15)
Everything works.

Link (5/5)
The link is there.

Contact (8/10)
You are pretty damn stalkable.

Extras (10/10)
Holy extras, Batman! You definitely love the extras.

Favorites There weren't any quotes in particular that stuck out to me, but I did enjoy this entry quite a bit.

Total: 83/100

Reviewer: Pat

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