perfect-race
November 30, 2005
Content (40/40)
First, may I just say that I am so honored to be reading about your journey from being a purging/anorexic young lady into becoming healthy again. I believe that other girls like you, who read this diary, may find it a help and relatable. I've always wanted to know what people like you thought and what your thought process was like. I'm glad that you've decided to share this with everyone. It helps me understand people who have this sickness better, and will understand where they are coming from now more then I have before. Thank you for that.
I really like the content that you have and why your diary is here, and what it's about. I think I made it clear that I think it's wonderful, but sometimes I have a trouble understanding what you are saying. Sometimes it's just the way the sentence is worded. Alright, now that I've read a couple more entries, maybe it was just that one that was hard to understand.
I like this quote
For now, I do this for track. Maybe someday I can do this for myself?Your diary reminds me of a book that I read. It was called "Diary of an Anorexic Girl" or something like that. I liked that book.
Most of your entires are long long long paragraphs, but for the most part they don't loose my attention. I'm always looking forward to your next entry, to see how you are doing.
Overall, I enjoyed your diary. I didn't get to read the whole thing, but I read parts from each chapter. CONGRADULATIONS!!!!
Layout (18/20)
Alright, the layout I think is suitable for your diary. It has a picture of the barbie on the left. I'm loving how you have that picture with the theme of your diary. It fits well. The font looks nice, the navigation is good, I just don't like the colors that much. It's kind of ... blah.
Navigation (13/15)
You have two points taken off here because the Disclaimer link doesn't work, and there is no credit to a designer.
Link (5/5)
On the contents page.
Extras (10/10)
You don't really have any extras, but I don't think you really need them. We get to see enough of you through your entries. You have links to sites that will help people with an eating disorder, so I guess that will count.
Contact (3/10)
Just notes.
Favorites/Comments
All of it. I liked it all. Basically the only points you got off was the layout part, navigation, and content. Which are all easy to fix.
Total: 89/100
Reviewer: Chaucee