ramla13
January 24, 2006
Content (12/40)
MAN, the first entry I read was SUPER long. If someone scrolled through all of your entries and stopped at the super long ones, one could see the day log of how your day went. You litterally start each paragraph with "___ period" and then go on to describe that period. WAY TOO MUCH DETAIL!!! It gets to be a drag, and boring. Just pick some HIGHLIGHTS from the day and not record every little thing. It's very tedious to read and I didn't enjoy it.
For some reason I want to say that this entry is about loosing your virginitiy, but of course I could be completely wrong. It just reminded me of that when I read it.
Basically your entries are SUPER long and are VERY tedious to read. I didn't enjoy it. Try to cut back on the detail and just pick some highlights if you really want to day log. I gave you 12 points because you DO update and sometimes have good entries (the ones that I've linked in this review).
Layout (16/20)
I acutally like the layout and I'm not quite sure why. I'm also wondering why you have a period at the end of your entry titles. The flowers and moon (?) are very nice. I wouldn't ever choose this layout for myself, but it works. I'm not partial to the latest five enries linked on under each entry or the other counters and such that you have there.
Navigation (15/15)
You do have a WHOLE LOT OF links. But they are arranged nicely and aren't cluttered.
Link (5/5)
Under the reviews page.
Extras (10/10)
You do have TONS of extras. Plenty to spend time on.
Contact (4/10)
Email, guestbook. You don't have notes linked on the front page. I know that I can go through the profile and then scroll all the way down to click on the leave a note button, but some people who haven't been to diaryland might not know that. It would be good to put that link there.
Favorites/Comments
Favorite Entries: Suffereing - I could relate to that entry, and I loved the words you picked.
Comments: Just try to cut back on the detail.
Total: 62/100
Reviewer: Chaucee