rockchick07
January 17, 2005
Content (13/20)
You have a casual, chatty style of writing. Your expression is not
very good, but I can tell that you are trying. As hard as you can? I'm
not sure, but I do think you try as hard as you feel you need to. I
suppose that is all I can ask of you.
Stumbling upon the most recent entries of your diary, I was a bit
worried about reflective content, until I delved deeper into the
summer months. You dwelt a lot more on inner struggles then. I liked
that. Perhaps personal struggles have diminished some by now, which is
wonderful, I don't want you to write about sad things which aren't
there, but you've become a bit dayloggy. If you really care for your
journal, try to reach back into the emotional self examination a bit.
It can even be positive things if you feel more positive lately. A bit
more heart and art, less day impart?
Layout (25/40)
Geez. This layout is bright. Neon pink and green screaming from the
computer scream, tearing at my eyes. I could hardly sit to review your
diary; this color scheme was so awful on my lately weak eyes. Sure it
matches, but it's horribly bright. I couldn't stand it.
Aside from the color scheme, this is a fallen star design; complete
with unfitting brush bevels, shadows and highlights. The code is
better than most of their designs, and unwittingly compliant, which is
fantastic. I would suggest a new template, but if the colors don't
bother you or any of your readers, by all means keep it.
Navigation(15/15)
It's convenient and easy to find. I detected no errors. My perception
of how the links should be organized is a bit different but I won't be
obsessive. Full points are deserved.
Link(5/5)
Yes, we are hiding in the chaos still! Thank you.
Extras(8/10)
Everything to be expected. Pictures, rings, quizzes, cast, bio, etc. I
adore the "interview" set up of your bio page. This is a creative
idea, and I like creativity.
Contact(8/10)
Notes, email, guestbook, guestmap. I think that's quite sufficient.
Favorites:
You almost glittered on this entry.
Waxing…philosophical almost. That entry had the most depth out of
everything I read. this entry about
friendships, and this one
about graduation were also nice. I think they showed the most
potential.
Total: 74/100 Reviewer: Megan