saintz
April 19, 2005
Content (30/40)
There are many punctuation, spelling and grammatical errors that bother me.
You can be very funny at times so I tried not to let it bother me, but it
appears that my thirst for proper punctuation, spelling and grammar outweigh
my thirst for laughter, which possibly makes me pathetic, but hopefully just
an expert in the nuances of the English language. I noticed that you spend
a lot of time on how you which you could change your life and how you wish
you could change the past. I think the danger lies in focusing so much on
the past that you can't change that you forget that you have a present and a
future that can be anything you want them to be. Overall, you make me
laugh, but at times you are just boring.
Layout (10/20)
Okay, I heart Jude Law, but the layout kind of, well, sucks. I don't much
care for gray, and your layout is very, very gray, my friend. There is an
attempt at color, but it's not that great.
Navigation (7/15)
You might want to do a little maintenance, as there are several links that
do not work
Link (0/5)
Well there is kind of a link, but it doesn't work so no I guess there isn't
a link.
Contact (8/10)
Not bad on the stalkablity.
Extras (6/10)
There are a few, and I especially like the Random entry link, because I tend
to be very random myself.
Favorites
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Total: 61/100
Reviewer: Pat