sickriotgirl
April 19, 2005
Content (20/40)
Grammar and spelling are definitely a problem. Especially spelling. Might
I suggest you try typing your entries first into a word processing program
and using spellcheck, since it seems to be such a huge problem for you.
There are also many very short entries that are not really about much.
There are times when I feel like you are interesting, intriguing and that
you have a lot to say, but the spelling and grammar make the entries hard to
enjoy. Are you drunk when you write your entries, or do you just never
bother to read them before you post them?
Layout (5/20)
The layout is from Velvet
Designs. I guess I'm just not that impressed with it. Plus, it's very
hard on the eyes, which makes your diary hard to read for any significant
period of time.
Navigation (10/15)
You might want to consider archiving some of your older entries to make your
"library" easier to use.
Link (3/5)
It's up, but
it's hard to find.
Contact (5/10)
It would be very hard to stalk you. Plus, you have a link to your notes,
but your notes feature is not turned on.
Extras (3/10)
Yeah, not much going on there.
Favorites I liked this entry. I might have loved it if there were not distracting spelling errors.
Total: 46/100
Reviewer: Pat