silveress
January 08, 2005
Content (10/20)
I really liked this line: "How is it possible that you protect your heart totally, you guard it so fiercely and yet, it can still get hurt?" (wake up with a breaking heart). That's so true.
Your entries didn't hold my attention for too long. I would sort of drag through the reading of the entries part, and hope that I was coming to an end soon. Mostly because I couldn't relate to it at all, and most of the time I was lost. Maybe I just wasn't paying attention or maybe I was...I don't know...out of it that day. But either way, I wasn't captivated by your writing, and it didn't interested me all that much.
Layout (22/40)
So you made this layout. Bonus points there (2). However, I can't read the writing that is above and beside the entry spot and links. That REALY bugs me. I would highly suggest for you to change that. I'm guessing that you are new to designing, so I want to encourage you as much as possible to continue to experiment with new things.
Navigtation(15/15)
All the links work, and are in nice order.
Link(5/5)
Yup, it's there.
Extras (10/10)
You do have a lot of extras, which is a good thing. It's always nice to know when people spend time on their diaries. You also have a list of your favorite entries, read them too.
Contact (5/10)
Email, notes. Guestbook? Aim? I know you had a tagboard and you took it down...don't know why though.
Favorites
Didn't really have any favorites. And thanks for waiting so patiently for your review, we are terribly sorry it took so long!
Total: 67/100
Reviewer: Chaucee.