sippingtea
October 29, 2004
Content (14/20)
Right away from the title of your diary I am guessing that you are a tea drinker and not a coffee one. I prefer both though. :) First, let me get this over with. What is up with this entry? Two people are writting in your diary? I'm not even sure which one is the actual "owner" of the diary. Please, this is your diary, not a place where people can post their own opinions and have a conversation with you. If you want that, just get a message board!
There are some spelling erorrs, which made me have to go back and say what? But I have spelling problems too, so it's all good. But being the reviewer I am supposed to be, I guess I have to say, watch more carefully while you are typing and it might be good just to re-read things once you are finished.
But the time I was finished reading all of your entries, I sort of guessed that two people were going to be writting in this diary.
Over all, your entries were good, just updates on you and how you are. Nothing real personal. Darn.
Layout (5/40)
I don't like this layout. I'm really sorry, but I dn't like it. Nothing goes at all. I'm really trying hard to find something good about it and the only thing I could come up with was that I like the font. I really don't like giving 0/40's so that's why I gave you points. But please, find another design if you can. :)
Navigation (10/15)
I think I might have stated somewhere before that I don't like it when people have little "code names" for their links. It gets me all confsued. I would rather them have just the name of the link that I'm going to. It really bugs me. But otherwise, everything is okay.
Link (5/5)
On the front page.
Extras (4/10)
You have rings. That's it. No biography, background, things about you. How am I supposed to understand this diary? It's already confusing me since there is two people writting. Who's diary is this? You should link this entry at least in your diary. I'm guessing this is Leo's and Christine's diary? Together?
Contact (4/10)
You have notes, and a tagboard.
Favorites/Comments
I'm sorry if I sounded harsh in this review, but I finally told myself, I actually gotta be a little bit harder reviewer, so I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings, but you asked for my opinion.
Total: 42/100 Look on the bright side, you can always get a re-review :)
Reviewed by: Chaucee