subz re-review
June 16, 2005
Content (27/40)
Well, you do have some swear words, but what can I expect with a world like today? I just think that better words could have enriched your writting and made it better than just trashy words.
Oh, and not having prev/next links is a real pain in the but, because I have to go back to your archives and then click on the next entry. I suggest putting those in.
Another that bugs me is that you never really end your sentences. All you do is put a couple of dots inbetween the sentences. For Example: I coudln't find anyone to help me out.....this turned into a problem....so i asked the clerk for directions Have mercy! Please end your sentences. Even if you did end your sentences, one sentence can go on and on and on....forever. I suggest that you read over what you type to make sure that it makes sense before you post it. I know that most of the time I have to do that because I write down what I'm thinking and I can't type as fast as I think. So it makes sense to me but not to anyone who's reading it. A problem with writting down in fragments (the way it comes out of our minds) is that, as a reviewer, I have no idea what you're talking about.
This entry clued me into some things that you've done. And I laughed at some, I have to admit.
Dustin. Oh boy. I understand that you like the guy, but you gotta learn the limit to how much you talk about him. It's unbelievable. I've had a serious relationship before and I know how much I would want to write about my guy...but really, hon, I'm honestly tierd of it. It's all people write about these days. And give me a little feeling. I read what I wrote in your last review, and I pretty much have to say the same thing. I'm trying to give you the benefit of the doubt here and be a little kinder since you have the guts to request the same reviewer who gave you a not so good score last time, but please tell me how you feel about what's going on in your life. The one thing that I can remember that you did that was when your Mom told Dustin that you were pissed, and you said that you were only a little. Woo-hoo! I think that was feeling! It gets boring with just a list of things that you did that day, which really didn't make sense anyways because of what I said earlier (about the sentences and all).
Well I think I've written already too much for this section of the reivew.
Layout (13/20)
Alright, here we go. I'm liking the layout except that it took me forever to find the links. But that's probably just me. So no points of for that. It kind of looks like you drew that picture and then scanned it (???) If you did, that's way better than I could have done - I suck at drawing BIG TIME. I don't like the font, and the scrollbar doesn't match. Maybe you could have centerd the picture a little more because there's a lot of empty space. But I have a bigger screen resolution so it would probably look better in a smaller resolution. Well it says copywrite at the top of the image, so I'm taking a pretty good guess that you designed this.
Navigation (13/15)
I couldn't find it right away, which was frustrating. They all work, that's good. And they are easy to read (once you find them).
Link (6/5)
On the Reviews page. And I must say, this is the best organized review page I have seen since I started reviewing. One extra point for that.
Extras (10/10)
Oh wow, 181 bands you have listed there. That's, ah, quite a lot. You had a good ammount of extras.
Contact (9/10)
Email, guestbook, and notes. Tagboard? Aim?
Favorites
I don't have any.
Total: 78/100
Reviewer: Chaucee