tarynheart

November 11, 2006

tarynheart

I like your reasoning in this entry about life. No matter how close we get it to be perfect, it always comes crashing down. The way this entry was written, I enjoyed quite much. This is a good place to start. However, you do not use capitals.

A theme I find pulsing throughout your diary is 1)you are a dreamer, and 2)you probably broke up with your first love (or a second,thrid..etc) and dream about him, and him coming back. Seems like you can't seem to let go. But that's just a stab in the dark from what I've gathered from reading your diary. Maybe you weren't together, but you just loved him silently...maybe he went to college. I don't know. These are all guesses. But those are the two themes throughout the more current entries of your diary.

I really like the way you write. I haven't found and entry that I don't like. However, I'm not fond of the template. The image seems to fit the style of your diary, but I just don't like like the colors. I don't, that baby blue thing never caught on with me.

Well thank you for letting me review your diary, I had a great time and thouroughly enjoyed it. And for that you've just made it on the hall of fame! Great job :) You got an A.

Favorites Quotes:
#1: as much as i want to be a "unique" person, i also like knowing i'm not alone in everything i feel.

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