the-story-of
April 30, 2005
Content (20/40)
There are occasional spelling mistakes, but not so that it completely annoys
me. However, something about the sentence structure is off; it’s very
bland. There’s no flow, no rhythm. I don’t really care about any of the
things that you write about. It’s all about what you did at school, and who
cares? Everything seems a bit superficial. Try going deeper into yourself
and you’ll see that reflected in your writing. Okay, and I get that you are
anti-smoking and anti-drugs and anti-whatever else, but do I really need to
be reminded of that in every single entry? I think not. To me, you see
very self-involved, like a bit of an attention-whore and even a little bit
selfish. I’m just not a fan, sorry.
Layout (13/20)
I like the stripes, and I love the colors, but I could do without the Goth
girl. I’m sure you, are like, soooooooooooo misunderstood, but spare me,
please. And what’s all that crap about waiting for your moment? Carpe
Diem, people. Get off your ass and seize the fucking day!
Navigation (13/15)
Everything seems to work okay, but if you are not careful you can miss the
links because they are so small compared to everything around them.
Link (5/5)
It’s there.
Contact (10/10)
I could stalk you without even trying.
Extras (7/10)
There are a few things.
Favorites
Total: 68/100
Reviewer: Pat